I like the overall idea of your opening sequence. I thinks you have made it flow very nicely and your drawings really show whats going on in the film, for example the protest is very obvious which is good. However I think you should add in your title of your film to indicate to the audience what we are watching :)
I like your storyline for your opening sequence, represent British Social realsim well. I like the music that you have chosen, it goes well with your opening sequence connoting the complicated situations faced in British Social Realism. :)
I think your story line is really good and you've presented British Social Realism quite well in your drawings. The music is suitable for your particular idea.
I like the overall idea of your opening sequence. I thinks you have made it flow very nicely and your drawings really show whats going on in the film, for example the protest is very obvious which is good. However I think you should add in your title of your film to indicate to the audience what we are watching :)
ReplyDeleteI like your storyline for your opening sequence, represent British Social realsim well. I like the music that you have chosen, it goes well with your opening sequence connoting the complicated situations faced in British Social Realism. :)
ReplyDeleteI think your story line is really good and you've presented British Social Realism quite well in your drawings. The music is suitable for your particular idea.
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